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A
few years back, I was hooked on
the TV show The X-Files.
You've probably heard of it. Well, along about the seventh season, the
gentleman who played Fox Mulder, David
Duchovny, filed a very public lawsuit over syndication royalties. A
legal battle ensued.
He
walked.
How did the writers handle this
gaping void
in their hit series? They brought in a
new man and a
new woman.
Mulder’s skeptic sidekick, Dana
Scully, still showed up now and
then, so I’m guessing they figured she
and these
two interlopers would make viewers
forget
about the one person upon whom the entire show had been built.
Ratings plummeted.
Viewers, including myself, found other shows to watch or other things to do on Sunday nights. After two seasons of
flailing around, the network did what it should’ve done the moment Mulder said
adios. It yanked The
X-Files off the air. Some
pointed squarely at the outlandish premises
and the thin characters
as grounds for the show's downfall. My reason for giving it up? No Mulder. If I couldn’t watch
him “search for the truth”
week after week, something we’d been doing together for seven years,
the party was over.
Done. Kaput.
One character made
all the difference.
There's
a reason we're drawn
to the likes of Atticus Finch,
Scarlett O'Hara, Don Vito Corleone and
even Fox Mulder:
they fit the criteria for what our brains perceive as real. They look like humans, they
walk like humans, they
talk, feel and even
screw up like humans. Therefore, they must be
humans.
Or at least
something with human traits. And the worst thing we can do, as writers, is to underestimate
the power of this perception.
As you already know, creating memorable characters requires a great deal of
time and thought. Matter of fact, it may very well be
the most extensive work we do as fiction writers.
And it all starts with the interview.
One by one, we sit our characters down and smack them with questions. When and where were they
born? Who were their
parents? What did their parents do for work and play? How many
siblings? Where do they fall in the
birth order? Were they
poor, rich, middle class? In which
cities/states/countries did they live? What did their
homes/bedrooms look like?
Which chores/jobs did they
have? What were their favorite books, songs, films, foods, colors, toys, sports, clothing, etc.?
Which schools did they attend? How were their
grades? What did they want to grow up and become? Who taught them to
ride a bicycle, to
drive a car? When did they first
fall in love? Were they
fat, skinny or average? Were they
pretty, ugly or average? Did they grow up with all their limbs, their senses? Did they experiment with
drugs, sex, different lifestyles? Did they suffer a severe loss or
sickness at an early age? Do they have a tic, a mannerism, a phobia or any other
developmental scar that has followed them throughout their lives?
Details, details, details. Aside from a
social security number, and even that might
play into some stories, we want to know everything about this person up to the moment
their story begins. Even if they
hail from Krypton. Each answer serves as
another hue
in the colorful portrait. The clearer we see
them, the better we write
them. We become their expert.
(She would never say that.) We move with authority.
(He’d know exactly how to handle a Burmese python.) We deal with specificity.
(When she’s nervous, she taps her fingertips as if she’s adding math problems over and over.)
Essentially, we bring them to life.
How do we know we've
accomplished this? Eventually our
readers, including agents and
editors, will tell us.
They'll use words similar to, "I
couldn't get her out of my mind!"
But long before we're ready to submit, we can deduce whether we're on
the right track by asking ourselves a few questions. Do we know
why our characters do what they
do? Are the reasons logical? Unique? Or have we simply resorted
to clichés? (Not all evil
people come from abusive environments.) Do we respect
the character's presence? Or is
she simply there to fill a plot
hole? (Not all mistresses are
blond, buxom and boneheaded.) Have we done our homework concerning the psychology
of this personality type? Do we, the author, care
what happens to this person?
Whew!
And we thought we'd just drop a
few people into a scene!
Not
if we want them to enjoy a long
life. Truth is, once
they’re upright and breathing,
characters no longer belong to us.
Readers take them home,
embrace them,
analyze them,
monitor them,
root for them (or their
demise) and become pretty upset when someone tries to erase
them. Let's make
sure ours can withstand
the scrutiny.
IN A NUTSHELL
A well-developed character carves a space
no one else can fill.
©
2006 Elizabeth Guy
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